The Dance of Life

May 20, 2010 at 12:48 pm 8 comments

god makes the music
he leads us into it
we feel the rhythm
we follow the beat

this world’s our oyster
as we meet on the floor
we think it’s forever
it’s illusion nothing more

it’s the dance of life
the holding on and the letting go
it’s a performance
every mortal has to go through


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8 Comments Add your own

  • 1. Joy  |  May 20, 2010 at 1:54 pm

    This is beautiful, Plar. I hope to read more of your poems.

    • 2. plaridel  |  May 20, 2010 at 3:51 pm


      thanks for the compliment. please come again.

  • 3. virtualanimosity  |  May 30, 2010 at 5:56 pm beautiful!! :((

  • 4. Rajlakshmi  |  March 23, 2011 at 1:35 pm

    thats a wonderful write.

    • 5. plaridel  |  March 23, 2011 at 9:17 pm


      cool! glad you liked it. 🙂

  • 6. Broken Sparkles  |  March 23, 2011 at 10:37 pm

    Very beautiful! You could say in a way life is a dance … How enchanting that dance would be it depends on the partner and the music … Thanks you for all your kind comments at my blog!

    • 7. plaridel  |  March 24, 2011 at 10:48 am

      broken sparkles:

      you’re so kind…

  • 8. fradgeebots  |  September 29, 2011 at 7:05 am

    I understood now what you want to say. 🙂


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