Whenever I Don’t See You
February 22, 2013 at 1:28 pm 22 comments
Tell me, is there any other way I can say how much I miss you? Dear one, I’m looking forward for your return. In the meantime, I wrote this poem for you.
whenever i don’t see you
i see what i can’t see
like the hands of this clock moving
and the day passing at sea
i see the waves turning black
and i can’t wait for morning
for without you, my dear one
the stars have lost their meaning
then the dawn starts breaking
and it doesn’t bring much delight
from where i stand, all i’d be seeing
is day blending into the night
whenever i don’t see you
i see a world fading fast
and no one else can bring its colors back
except you who have claimed my heart
Entry filed under: Blogroll, daily prompt. Tags: love, poem, poetry, postaday.
1.
Joy | February 22, 2013 at 3:39 pm
The poet is back after a long spell. 😀
2.
plaridel | February 23, 2013 at 9:01 am
joy:
LOL!
3.
peepsideshow | February 22, 2013 at 4:53 pm
Cheesy works!
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plaridel | February 23, 2013 at 9:02 am
peepsideshow:
I guess timing is everything.
5.
Mariane | February 22, 2013 at 5:36 pm
Beautiful 😀
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plaridel | February 23, 2013 at 9:02 am
mariane:
thank you.
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Gracie | February 22, 2013 at 7:13 pm
Very cool shot, and a beautiful poem to go with it too.
8.
plaridel | February 23, 2013 at 9:03 am
gracie:
i’m glad you liked it.
9.
AC | February 23, 2013 at 4:41 am
Ganda! 🙂
10.
plaridel | February 23, 2013 at 9:04 am
ac:
it must be the valentine bug. 🙂
11.
dianewrites | February 28, 2013 at 12:30 am
Look at what Valentine’s month can do 🙂 It unleashes the romantic creative side of someone 😉
12.
plaridel | February 28, 2013 at 1:49 pm
diane:
yes, it’s a good time to open up and be vulnerable. 🙂
13.
joye029Lj | March 3, 2013 at 2:50 am
galing naman..na-miss kong magbasa nito 🙂
14.
plaridel | March 3, 2013 at 1:30 pm
joye029Lj:
welcome back. 🙂
15.
skippyheart | July 20, 2013 at 6:09 pm
awww ganda! Love this kind of poems! 🙂
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plaridel | July 20, 2013 at 9:46 pm
skip:
i’m happy that you liked it.
17.
dream07young | February 11, 2014 at 8:36 pm
Aww that’s beautiful x
18.
plaridel | February 11, 2014 at 11:42 pm
zoya:
thank you for reading. glad you liked it.
19.
MotiWarrior | July 24, 2016 at 12:07 pm
Pretty words 🙂
20.
plaridel | July 25, 2016 at 7:03 pm
motiwarrior
thank you. i’m glad you liked it. 🙂
21.
adventuresofabusymomcom | August 27, 2017 at 12:23 pm
Beautiful. I’m going to share this to my husband during deployment! Thank you!
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plaridel | August 28, 2017 at 9:26 am
lacy:
i’m glad you liked it. thank you.