It’s A Feeling

July 31, 2013 at 10:17 am 38 comments





 
Thank you for the inspiration. Even in your most simple gestures, you continue to amaze me. Dear one, I wrote this poem for you.

it’s a feeling and i say it true
it’s about taking this road
and walking through a field of greens
and exploring canyons deep
and flat valleys reaching up
it’s a feeling of stars appearing
when the eyes are closed
and causing the moon to hide
in a shy but unembarrasing way
it’s about finally seeing the light
it’s a feeling and the feeling is you

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  • 1. Daily Prompt: Pat on the Back | flow of my soul  |  July 31, 2013 at 10:56 am

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  • 3. skippyheart  |  July 31, 2013 at 1:38 pm

    Awww such a wonderful poem! I’m feeling kilig for your “dear one” πŸ˜‰

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    • 4. plaridel  |  August 1, 2013 at 4:14 pm

      skip:

      coming from you, i take it as a great compliment. πŸ™‚

      Reply
  • 5. elizz  |  July 31, 2013 at 5:27 pm

    sweet!

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    • 6. plaridel  |  August 1, 2013 at 4:14 pm

      elizz:

      thanks for the moral support. πŸ™‚

      Reply
  • 7. krn  |  July 31, 2013 at 11:44 pm

    Yiiih. That dear one is so lucky.

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    • 8. plaridel  |  August 1, 2013 at 4:15 pm

      krm:

      just hoping it’s not too cheesy. 😦

      Reply
      • 9. krn  |  August 14, 2013 at 4:45 am

        It is. Cheese is good for the bones. πŸ˜€

        Reply
  • 10. Remembering 2012 | Ellen Clarkson  |  August 6, 2013 at 8:52 am

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  • 11. barbarafranken  |  September 2, 2013 at 8:11 am

    I love the poem…. thanks for following me…. i’ll enjoy catching up on your journey too… and maybe find out who she is…
    Barbara

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    • 12. plaridel  |  September 3, 2013 at 2:54 pm

      Barbara:

      glad you liked the poem. i’d be inspired to write more. πŸ™‚

      Reply
  • 13. DG MARYOGA  |  April 2, 2014 at 4:54 pm

    Most evocative verses,my friend !!! I’m glad I spotted your blog through Amy’s brilliant posts :

    http://shareandconnect.wordpress.com/2014/04/02/phoneography-and-non-slr-digital-devices-photo-challenge-editing-and-processing/

    BTW,your name,plaridel,is so poetic,it sounds like a lyric poem to my ears.Presumably,it has to do with the combination of vowels and consonants. All the best,
    Doda

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    • 14. plaridel  |  April 2, 2014 at 5:14 pm

      DG MARYOGA:

      oh, i’m glad you liked this little poem. it was one of the easiest to write.

      plaridel is actually the pseudonym of marcelo del pilar, a filipino journalist and hero during the spanish colonization of the philippines. it was an anagram derived from his last name “del pilar.”

      you can find more information about him here:

      http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Marcelo_H._del_Pilar

      Reply
      • 15. DG MARYOGA  |  April 2, 2014 at 5:35 pm

        Thank you my friend for all the details and the wiki link.Most interesting to know !!! All the best,
        Doda

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        • 16. plaridel  |  April 2, 2014 at 6:26 pm

          doda:

          you’re much welcome.

          Reply
  • 17. Life After Fifty  |  September 18, 2017 at 11:25 am

    ..eyes closed..see,feel the light…surely?

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    • 18. plaridel  |  September 18, 2017 at 10:35 pm

      malkatm:

      but of course. πŸ™‚

      Reply
  • 19. stoner on a rollercoaster  |  September 18, 2017 at 1:10 pm

    Awwww
    What a lucky person this dear one must be. πŸ™‚

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    • 20. plaridel  |  September 18, 2017 at 10:34 pm

      alyana:

      thanks. i’m glad you liked it. πŸ™‚

      Reply
      • 21. stoner on a rollercoaster  |  September 18, 2017 at 10:44 pm

        Cmon its adorable.

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        • 22. plaridel  |  September 20, 2017 at 3:16 pm

          alyana:

          i’ll take your word for it then. thank you. πŸ™‚

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          • 23. stoner on a rollercoaster  |  September 20, 2017 at 11:29 pm

            You’re welcome πŸ™‚

            Reply
            • 24. plaridel  |  September 21, 2017 at 2:15 pm

              alyana:

              you’re blog is one of the best. it’s listed now as one of my favorites. keep up the good work.

              Reply
              • 25. stoner on a rollercoaster  |  September 21, 2017 at 3:24 pm

                Thank you so much. This means a lot to me πŸ™‚

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                • 26. plaridel  |  September 22, 2017 at 5:19 am

                  alyana:

                  you’re welcome. my one bit of advice is to prepare for longevity. Pace your blog posts so that you don’t run out of steam. many good writers have learned that lesson too late. they have closed shop after a few months. πŸ™‚

                  Reply
                  • 27. stoner on a rollercoaster  |  September 22, 2017 at 11:09 am

                    Thank you so much for thoughtful advice.
                    I have a huge deposit of underconstruction blog posts and ideas so hopefully that wont happen soon. Then i have a hyper brain that cannot stop. Ahah. The only day this shop will close will be the day i will stop enjoying blogging.

                    Do i need to slow down or post more frequently?? This is something i ask myself everyday.

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                    • 28. plaridel  |  September 23, 2017 at 9:37 am

                      alyana:

                      i think you need to slow down a bit if you’re in it for the long haul. as the saying goes, it’s wise to prepare for the rainy days. πŸ™‚

                    • 29. stoner on a rollercoaster  |  September 23, 2017 at 9:39 am

                      What if i tell you i have more than 200 underconstruction posts…*buries my face in a pillow*

                    • 30. plaridel  |  September 23, 2017 at 2:09 pm

                      alyana:

                      that’s incredible. i don’t doubt it for a minute.

                    • 31. stoner on a rollercoaster  |  September 23, 2017 at 2:20 pm

                      It seems crazy at times..but..cant help it. πŸ™‚

                    • 32. stoner on a rollercoaster  |  September 23, 2017 at 11:25 am

                      1 post a day is fine??

                    • 33. plaridel  |  September 23, 2017 at 2:11 pm

                      alyana:

                      i’d say 1 or 2 a week will be ideal. however, this doesn’t mean you should limit your output. keep writing and let ypur creative juice going. just pace the process of publishing them. in the meantime, while they’re on hold you can refine and make them better.

                      1 or 2 a week will also give your readers enough time to digest and react to your posts. πŸ™‚

                      in 10 years of blogging, i’ve seen blogs die after a great start. many of them didn’t last a year proving that there’s more to life than blogging.

                      anyway, i’ve posted more than 900 articles so far. at the rate things are going, you can easily surpass that.

                    • 34. stoner on a rollercoaster  |  September 23, 2017 at 2:20 pm

                      10 years??? Really??
                      Actually i have anxiety issues and i am so hyper the purpose of this blog was to direct my energy somewhere.

                      But i understand. Its v difficult for me to not to post everyday as this has also become a channel of communication and networking. And its been helping me a lot mentaly. I started it as a therapy and its helping so far. Blessed to have amazing people around πŸ™‚
                      I will restrict to 1 post a day thought i was planning to do more. As i am not working because of health issues but soon i wont be having enough time so will deposit more in underconstruction folder.

                      Your advice is very thoughtful and makes. I highly appriciate it πŸ™‚

                    • 35. plaridel  |  September 23, 2017 at 10:02 pm

                      alyana:

                      it’s your blog. please do whatever works for you. πŸ™‚

                    • 36. stoner on a rollercoaster  |  September 24, 2017 at 2:14 am

                      Thanks for taking time and being kind enough to give honest suggestion. I appriciate it. πŸ™‚

                    • 37. plaridel  |  September 25, 2017 at 10:02 am

                      alyana:

                      you’re always welcome. πŸ™‚

                    • 38. stoner on a rollercoaster  |  September 23, 2017 at 2:28 pm

                      Makes sense*

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