Remembrance
April 26, 2017 at 1:00 pm 36 comments
For Friday Fictioneers 100-Word Challenge: 28 April 2017
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Photo Credit: Liz Young
i met you on st. patrick’s day
just when spring was beckoning
and death took you one autumn
when leaves started falling
then autumn became winter
and winter turned to spring again
and spring became summer
but without you it wasn’t the same
many seasons have passed since then
i can count with my fingers
all’s left is your memory
and love, it lingers, it lingers
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Entry filed under: Blogroll, friday fictioneers. Tags: 100-word challenge, fiction, poem.
1.
jellico84 | April 26, 2017 at 3:04 pm
Well written. Reminds me of Emily Dickinson. A beauty in the stillness, a peace in the quiet, such as what lingers on in the soul after life has ended.
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plaridel | April 26, 2017 at 11:22 pm
jelli:
thank you. i love emily dickinson. i don’t mind rereading her poems all the time. it always makes me discover something that i’ve missed before.
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jellico84 | April 27, 2017 at 5:44 am
Agreed. I used to have a very very worn and dog-eared copy that I carried in the car to read while waiting for Hubby.
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plaridel | April 27, 2017 at 3:29 pm
jelli:
i’m glad to hear that. 🙂
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rochellewisoff | April 26, 2017 at 3:31 pm
Dear Plaridel,
Achingly beautiful poem.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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plaridel | April 26, 2017 at 11:23 pm
rochelle:
this week’s photo evokes a feeling of sadness and loss. it reminds me of this poem that i wrote many years ago.
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draliman | April 27, 2017 at 5:29 am
Lovely yet sad.
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plaridel | April 27, 2017 at 3:30 pm
draliman:
thank you.
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Dale | April 27, 2017 at 6:25 am
Beautifully done, Plaridel.
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plaridel | April 27, 2017 at 3:29 pm
dale:
thank you.
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gahlearner | April 27, 2017 at 6:34 am
Beautiful and sad, I love it.
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plaridel | April 27, 2017 at 3:29 pm
gahlearner:
thank you.
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michael1148humphris | April 27, 2017 at 8:00 am
For me as a non poet, this was great to read,
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plaridel | April 27, 2017 at 3:28 pm
michael:
thank you. i don’t pretend to be a poet either.
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Sandra | April 27, 2017 at 9:35 am
Very nicely done.
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plaridel | April 27, 2017 at 3:28 pm
sandra:
thank you.
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Björn Rudberg (brudberg) | April 27, 2017 at 10:32 am
This is such sadness to be left there all alone.
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plaridel | April 27, 2017 at 3:27 pm
björn:
thank you.
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yuhublogger | April 27, 2017 at 11:13 am
What a lovely poem. Sad, but lovely.
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plaridel | April 27, 2017 at 3:31 pm
yuhu:
thank you.
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Alicia Jamtaas | April 27, 2017 at 4:58 pm
The repetition in that last line . . . Yum! Very well done.
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plaridel | April 28, 2017 at 4:43 pm
alicia:
thank you.
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spicedmullings | April 27, 2017 at 11:29 pm
Sweetly simple, pleasant poem, dream writing!💐
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plaridel | April 28, 2017 at 4:42 pm
sabina:
thank you.
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rgayer55 | April 28, 2017 at 3:24 am
The longing and sadness, beautifully expressed.
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plaridel | April 28, 2017 at 4:42 pm
russell:
thank you.
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TraceyDelaplainMD.com and WhatsForDinnerDoc.com | April 28, 2017 at 7:42 am
Yes, love lingers.
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plaridel | April 28, 2017 at 4:42 pm
tracey:
thank you.
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Christine Goodnough | April 28, 2017 at 6:55 pm
Nice one.
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plaridel | April 30, 2017 at 6:41 pm
christine:
thank you.
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Indira | April 29, 2017 at 12:06 pm
Beautiful and touching.
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plaridel | April 30, 2017 at 6:41 pm
indira:
thank you.
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lingeringvisions by Dawn | April 30, 2017 at 9:45 pm
Very nice
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plaridel | May 1, 2017 at 9:36 am
dawn:
thank you.
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Liz Young | May 1, 2017 at 5:47 am
Such sadness in those twelve lines! Well done.
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plaridel | May 1, 2017 at 9:37 am
liz:
thank you.