Hanging Loose

July 28, 2021 at 9:31 am 31 comments

For Friday Fictioneers 100-Word Challenge: 30 July 2021

Roger Bultot
Photo Credit: Roger Bultot

 
Donald was chiseled to perfection and worked at a strip club where he earned big tips from the ladies.

On his free time, he loved to hang loose on the beach and take selfies and post them on the internet. Flaunting his masculinity, he usually wore a pair of baggy shorts with no underwear underneath. It was a gravity-defying feat that he was able to get away with.

His luck eventually ran out when he went to a newly-opened beach. Donald was cited and fined for dressing inappropriately which was against the rules. It was a nudist beach after all.

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31 Comments Add your own

  • 1. neilmacdon  |  July 28, 2021 at 9:58 am

    Sounds like it should have been right up Donald’s street

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    • 2. plaridel  |  July 29, 2021 at 8:41 am

      neil:

      it is actually. πŸ™‚

      Reply
  • 3. rochellewisoff  |  July 28, 2021 at 11:06 am

    Dear Plaridel,

    That was a fun twist. I wouldn’t think Donald would have a problem with shedding the offending shorts. πŸ˜‰

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    • 4. plaridel  |  July 29, 2021 at 8:41 am

      rochelle:

      he’d rather not. displaying what’s behind it in public is bad business for a stripper. πŸ™‚

      Reply
  • 5. Ain Starlingsson  |  July 28, 2021 at 12:53 pm

    Funny twist!

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    • 6. plaridel  |  July 29, 2021 at 8:41 am

      ain:

      glad it worked somehow. πŸ™‚

      Reply
  • 7. granonine  |  July 28, 2021 at 6:09 pm

    Laughing right out loud :). Wonderful build-up to a fitting end πŸ™‚

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    • 8. plaridel  |  July 29, 2021 at 8:40 am

      linda:

      it’s very kind of you. thank you. πŸ™‚

      Reply
  • 9. Liz Young  |  July 29, 2021 at 9:51 am

    ‘Gravity-defying feat’ had me wondering about the power of mind over matter!

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    • 10. plaridel  |  July 30, 2021 at 8:05 am

      liz:

      me too. πŸ™‚

      Reply
  • 11. draliman  |  July 29, 2021 at 10:32 pm

    Ha, opposite to the usual inappropriate dressing, fun!

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    • 12. plaridel  |  July 30, 2021 at 8:05 am

      draliman:

      coming from you, i takr it as a great compliment. thank you.

      Reply
  • 13. Keith's Ramblings  |  July 30, 2021 at 2:52 am

    An amusing little tale from beginning to end! Nice one plaridel.

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    • 14. plaridel  |  July 30, 2021 at 8:04 am

      keith:

      i appreciate your comment very much. thank you.

      Reply
  • 15. James McEwan  |  July 30, 2021 at 3:15 am

    That will teach Donald. I wonder if some of the ladies on the nudist beach knew him from the strip club – and wanted more!

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    • 16. plaridel  |  July 30, 2021 at 8:03 am

      james:

      it’s highly probable. πŸ™‚

      Reply
  • 17. Brenda's Thoughts  |  July 30, 2021 at 5:57 am

    That’s a funny twist!

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    • 18. plaridel  |  July 30, 2021 at 8:03 am

      brenda:

      thank you for reading as usual. much appreciated.

      Reply
  • 19. Dale  |  July 30, 2021 at 8:32 am

    Hahahaha! You crack me up, Plaridel!

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    • 20. plaridel  |  July 31, 2021 at 8:11 am

      dale:

      it must be worth writing it then. πŸ™‚

      Reply
      • 21. Dale  |  July 31, 2021 at 8:12 am

        Absolutely!

        Reply
  • 22. GHLearner  |  July 30, 2021 at 9:31 am

    Hehehe. If he had paid attention to something apart from himself for a change, it wouldn’t have happened. Great descriptions.

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    • 23. plaridel  |  July 31, 2021 at 8:11 am

      gabi:

      i totally agree. πŸ™‚

      Reply
  • 24. Russell Gayer  |  July 30, 2021 at 11:53 am

    Well done. You’re own your way to making a fine humorist.

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    • 25. plaridel  |  July 31, 2021 at 8:10 am

      russell:

      you made my day. thank you. πŸ™‚

      Reply
  • 26. msjadeli  |  July 30, 2021 at 6:04 pm

    Donald sounds like a real thrill seeker.

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    • 27. plaridel  |  July 31, 2021 at 8:10 am

      msjadeli:

      too self-absorbed for his own good. πŸ™‚

      Reply
  • 28. michaelwynnauthor  |  July 31, 2021 at 7:01 am

    Thank God the twist was what it was. I was worried you were about to describe the indescribable for a moment.

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    • 29. plaridel  |  July 31, 2021 at 8:10 am

      michael:

      i almost did. had to change my mind at the last minute. πŸ™‚

      Reply
  • 30. pennygadd51  |  August 2, 2021 at 10:22 am

    Great twist to conclude your story of the ups and downs of a male stripper. You had me chuckling!

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    • 31. plaridel  |  August 4, 2021 at 9:40 am

      penny:

      glad it was worth a few chuckles. you made my day. πŸ™‚

      Reply

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